Strong verbs are essential for great writing.
Not only do you need to know HOW to use powerful verbs, but having a strong verbs list at your disposal is invaluable. We’ll cover both for you.
I used to think writing a book was easy.
And in all honesty, writing has never been the most difficult thing in the world for me but when it comes to writing stories and crafting my writing in a way that compels others and pulls them in deeply, it’s been an uphill battle – before I discovered using strong verbs, that is.
I never struggled with putting my thoughts on paper or even coming up with the ideas.
My biggest hurdle was bringing the emotion I was trying to convey to life.
And as I delved deeper into the literary world, I quickly realized that using strong verbs is a must if you want to create something that leaves a lasting impact.
What is a strong verb?
Thanks to every English class growing up, you know a verb is a word used to describe an action, state, or occurrence.
But what’s the deal with strong verbs? It’s not like they can hit the gym and bulk up, right?
A strong verb is a better and more descriptive version of a basic verb that creates a stronger visual and can help create a mood (or vibe) for the scene.
So although you can use the basic verb and still tell the same story, you will create a deeper impact within the reader if you use a strong verb in its place.
Strong verbs only help your writing
I’ll be real with you here. Using strong verbs will definitely make your writing more intriguing and will increase the chances of someone buying (and loving!) your book.
BUT, they won’t help you know how to publish a book that sells.
And what’s the point of having incredible writing if you can’t publish it in a way that allows for the world to see it?
Well, that’s where we come in. No matter how great your book is, you still need to know how to put it all together, market it, and then self-publish in a way that generates sales.
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Strong verbs VS weak verbs
What’s the real difference here? How can you tell the difference between a strong verb and a weak one?
Since you can’t exactly ask words to flex, you need another system to determine if your verbs are weak or not.
Here’s how we define strong verbs vs weak verbs:
Weak verbs are the “basic” forms of a specific action, like “walked” or “ran.”
Strong verbs are a specified form of a broader action, like “stomped” or “bolted.”
So the main thing you need to remember when it comes to strong verbs vs weak verbs is how specific it is.
How to use strong verbs in writing
Littering your writing with strong verbs won’t necessarily make it any better. In fact, if you overdo it, those verbs will have the opposite effect.
Instead of making your writing stronger, it can bring it down to an amateur level.
That being said, I created the video below in order to help you understand how to use strong verbs in your writing the right way.
Why use strong verbs for writing
Because your writing will be better overall. One of the best ways you can immediately make our writing stronger is by going through and crossing out each weak verb and replacing it with a better one.
Here’s how your writing will improve when you choose to use strong verbs.
#1 – Stronger visuals
One of the most important parts of any book is that your readers can get a precise visual. If they’re going through the chapters not fully picturing what’s happening, they won’t be fully invested.
And readers who aren’t invested don’t become fans. And they don’t leave reviews. And they don’t buy any other books you publish.
Strong verbs take a basic sentence and form a very specific image in the reader’s mind. Doing this throughout the entirety of your book will leave your readers feeling as if they just stepped out of an entirely different world.
And that’s exactly what you want.
Take these strong verb descriptions for example:
- She walked into the room, her cape trailing after her.
- She charged into the room, her cape billowing after her.
- She strutted into the room, her cape flowing after her.
Each of these sentences is extremely similar in what they tell you; a girl with a cape entered a room.
But changing the verbs from “walked” to “charged” to “strutted” alters the way in which she entered.
It tells you the how.
And knowing how an action takes place sets up far more than just the image for the reader. It tells them the mood the character’s in, increases suspense in some cases, and even creates anticipation for what’s to follow.
#2 – More impactful emotions
The goal of your book (and any book, really) is to make your reader feel something. You want to stir emotions in them.
That’s why they read books. That, and they want to be transported to a different world, which strong verbs are also used for.
But one of the main reasons to use strong verbs in writing is to create a more emotional impact.
When you want to create a strong reaction in your reader, no matter what type of reaction that is, you need to use strong verbs.
Here’s an example of creating more anxiety or anticipation in your readers:
- My heart was beating so fast I could hear it.
- My heart crashed against my ribs, echoing in my head.
Which sentence gives you a clearer picture of the anxiety that must be felt?
The second, right.
Because replacing “was beating fast” with “crashed against my ribs,” shows you just how hard my heart felt. And that’s the difference between a weak verb and a strong one.
#3 – Helps you show, not tell
By now you know just how important showing versus telling is in writing. And one powerful way to show more and tell less is to use strong verbs.
It forces you to think more about the visual you’re trying to show the reader instead of just telling them what happened.
Because showing creates a stronger emotional connection between the reader and your book, replacing weak verbs with more powerful ones will hook your readers.
For those of you who struggle with showing and not telling, focusing on using better verbs will help tremendously.
#4 – They reduce weak adverbs
When you’re writing, you may have a tendency to write sentences like, “I gripped the steering wheel firmly.” While this doesn’t look like a terrible sentence, it also doesn’t convey a very strong visual.
Whenever you have an adverb, you should replace it with a stronger verb. That’s all an adverb is. It gives your weak verb a boost but it doesn’t actually make your sentence any stronger.
Instead, replace “gripped firmly” with a powerful verb like “clenched” or “squeezed.”
“I clenched the steering wheel” is a much stronger sentence that gives a clearer visual.
Go through your writing and pick out some adverbs to replace. Your writing will be better because of it.
#5 – They make for more concise writing
Have you ever picked up a book that looked decent enough and even had an awesome title only to start reading and be turned off by how wordy and jumbled it is?
Strong verbs prevent this.
When you replace weak verbs and adverbs with a single stronger verb, you get rid of the excess writing that can make reading harder.
It also saves you a ton of time cutting words during the editing phase.
Because you’re using one word to create a strong visual, you won’t have to write more trying to describe how it looks to you. That strong verb does the job for you.
This also allows for easier, more fluid writing and reading.
Strong action verbs for better writing
I won’t lie. One of the most frustrating things to read is a book that lacks strong verbs in scenes that are meant to be full of action.
You’ll find this most often in fiction, but nonfiction books can be just as (if not more!) guilty of this. When you have a story that should leave the reader’s heart pounding but it doesn’t even raise their eyebrows, you have to do some digging to improve.
Here’s just a taste of how you can take your writing from “meh” to “wow!”
What to do Next
It’s not enough to just know what strong verbs are and how to use them. You actually have to put these tips to use in your own book and implement what you’ve learned.
Here’s what you can do right now to improve your writing and your book!
#1 – Watch our instructional editing video
Sometimes it’s hard to take what you’ve learned and actually implement it in your own writing. How do you know which words to replace and which are already good?
I put together a video teaching you how to edit your own writing when replacing basic verbs with stronger, better ones.
Make sure to check it out and even comment which part of the video was most helpful to you!
#2 – Create your own verb list!
Editing is made so much easier and faster when you don’t have to constantly look up words to replace your weak verbs.
And you know what? It’s something you can easily do in a short amount of time.
That’s right. We suggest putting together a list of strong verbs and which weak verbs they’re great for replacing. All you need to do is find the weak verb you want to replace and choose a more powerful word from your list that fits the mood you’re trying to convey.
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